Jordan Sample resume FINAL v2.txt · 103 words · checked against: Operations Coordinator
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| Applicant systems can read the text | 20/20 | 103 words extracted cleanly. |
| File name works for you | 0/5 | The employer sees "Jordan Sample resume FINAL v2.txt" on upload. Fix: Name it First-Last-Resume.pdf. Never 'final', 'v3' or 'copy'. |
| Contact details complete | 2/10 | Missing: phone, LinkedIn URL, city, state. Fix: Add phone, LinkedIn URL, city, state to the top line. Recruiters filter by location. |
| Standard section headings | 4/10 | No standard heading found for: education, skills. Fix: Use plain headings (Experience, Education, Skills). Creative headings confuse parsers. |
| Length | 2/5 | 103 words. Fix: Too thin: add results under each role. |
| Results with numbers | 0/20 | 0 of 9 bullet points (0%) contain a number, percent or dollar figure. Fix: Aim for at least half your bullets to show a number: how many, how much, how fast. |
| Strong action verbs | 0/10 | Duty-style phrases: "responsible for", "duties included", "helped", "worked on", "assisted with", "in charge of". Fix: Replace "responsible for" with what you did and what changed: "Cut invoice errors 30% by..." |
| Specific, not generic | 1/5 | Stock phrases: "hard-working", "team player", "detail-oriented", "fast learner". Fix: Swap each stock phrase for one proof. Show 'detail-oriented' with an error rate. |
| Modern resume voice | 2/5 | Found 4 uses of I/my/me and an "Objective" section. Fix: Drop I/my, and replace an Objective with a 2-line Summary saying what you do best. |
| Matches the job description | 5/15 | 3 of 9 key terms from the posting appear in your resume (33%). Fix: Work the missing terms in where they are true for you: operations coordinator, vendor management, process improvement, quickbooks, budget, excel. |
An automated score reads structure and wording. It cannot judge positioning: whether your resume answers the question the hiring manager is really asking. That part takes a person.
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